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Thursday, September 9, 2010
1st Period Stories
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If I had 3 wishes,my first one would be I wish I could do what ever I want whenever I want. My second wish would be, I wish school was an option. And my third and final wish would be, I wish my dad was not losing his job this December and that we were rich. $$$
My nickname is tard. This is my nickname at my church. I got this nickname from two girls at my church we were at youth convention and they came up and said hey wills tard. They said this because i hangout with my a lot uncle will. One of the girls that gave me the nickname was my uncles girlfriend. But they don't mean it like I'm retarded or anything. Its just a funny nickname. I don't really care about the nickname.
One night my mom was at wallmart and my dad was at work so i called two of my friends over to my house. We took of the chains of two chain saws and got a lot of fake blood has soon has my mom pulled up i ran to her car I was covered with fake blood and i put my hand on the window and said run then my twi friends ran .............
Nickname My brother gave me my nickname witch is j.j he gave me that nickname because he couldn't pronounce Jennifer. Then my other brother his name is Jovanny he called me jenny and thats always been my nickname but he herd my other brother Johnathan and he started calling me j.j too. Sofia my best friend she started calling me j.j too like all the time she talked about me she said well j.j did this today and like the other person was like is j.j and she would tell them then that person started calling me that. Almost all of my friends call me that now. I like that nickname just because me its kinda sweet thinking of my brother when he wasn't able to pronounce words and cause j.j makes me sound sweet. I really don't have any complains to it.
For the third day out at sea, out alone on this island, I start to wonder how much more longer I'm going to be here. Having that thought in my head I go wonder around. About 15-20 minutes later, I find a empty glass bottle. As I was picking it up, I thought, "what writing utensils do i have on me?"
Once there was a man that worked in an office. He was the top salesman . He was always salesman of the month. But one day he came across a homeless man. He asked for change and the man didn't mind not giving him anything. So the homeless man asked if he could have some food instead. So once more the homeless man asked for an extra room he could let him stay in. Again the salesman ignored him and kept walking. So the homeless man cursed the salesman! :o It was getting late that day, about 10:00 in the afternoon. The salesman,a.k.a Richie,was watching t.v. As he was surfing through the channels the windows in his balcony opened wide open! The t.v. flew out the balcony. And then, ........ TO BE CONTINUED!!!!
"OUT AT SEA" I have been out at sea for 21 days on a small raft. It is painted red underneath so i am watching out for sharks. It is cold where I am so i see salmon and other fish jumping out of the water. As I try to catch one I fall in. I race back in the raft and warm myself up quickly so hypothermia will not set in...
out at sea well i was on a crusie and this big storm was coming and the captian said get to you're rooms you will be safe there and so we all went to our rooms and then a huge wave hit the boat and about say 20,000 people went to the upper deck and i was one of them. Then all the sudden the boat was sinking and we were goimg under so i was the only one to get a saftey boat so 19,000 people died that day and now im sitting here thinking what am i going to do????? It has been 10 days since that day i am starving and thirsty there are fish all around me and then all the sudden there is blood all around me and i started to panick and so to calm myself down i layed down then something was poking me and i was screaming i could have thought i saw something jump up in the air. so i ask myself am i going crazy????? Well no because there were now a pack of sharks around me and i could tell who was the leader because it was so huge that i thought that it was a bull shark but i dont know what kinda shark they were.Then i saw that i was bleeding because earlier i cut myself with pocket knife. So then i guess that the shark smelt it it bit my raft and tore the front half off. So now im scared then far off i see a boat and i start screaming and they here me so they speed over there a magicly all the sharks are gone and when the people got there i was saved and when they got me to land they had to fly me out to the hospital and i went home after two weeks and my family was so happy when i got home but i couldnt go anywhere for a week the doctors orders.So now im home safe and that is the end of my storie
If I had 3 wishes,my first one would be I wish I could do what ever I want whenever I want. My second wish would be, I wish school was an option. And my third and final wish would be, I wish my dad was not losing his job this December and that we were rich. $$$
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ReplyDeleteMy nickname is tard. This is my nickname at my church. I got this nickname from two girls at my church we were at youth convention and they came up and said hey wills tard. They said this because i hangout with my a lot uncle will. One of the girls that gave me the nickname was my uncles girlfriend. But they don't mean it like I'm retarded or anything. Its just a funny nickname. I don't really care about the nickname.
One night my mom was at wallmart and my dad was at work so i called two of my friends over to my house. We took of the chains of two chain saws and got a lot of fake blood has soon has my mom pulled up i ran to her car I was covered with fake blood and i put my hand on the window and said run then my twi friends ran .............
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ReplyDeleteMy brother gave me my nickname witch is j.j he gave me that nickname because he couldn't pronounce Jennifer. Then my other brother his name is Jovanny he called me jenny and thats always been my nickname but he herd my other brother Johnathan and he started calling me j.j too. Sofia my best friend she started calling me j.j too like all the time she talked about me she said well j.j did this today and like the other person was like is j.j and she would tell them then that person started calling me that. Almost all of my friends call me that now. I like that nickname just because me its kinda sweet thinking of my brother when he wasn't able to pronounce words and cause j.j makes me sound sweet. I really don't have any complains to it.
For the third day out at sea, out alone on this island, I start to wonder how much more longer I'm going to be here. Having that thought in my head I go wonder around. About 15-20 minutes later, I find a empty glass bottle. As I was picking it up, I thought, "what writing utensils do i have on me?"
ReplyDeleteOnce there was a man that worked in an office. He was the top salesman . He was always salesman of the month. But one day he came across a homeless man. He asked for change and the man didn't mind not giving him anything. So the homeless man asked if he could have some food instead. So once more the homeless man asked for an extra room he could let him stay in. Again the salesman ignored him and kept walking. So the homeless man cursed the salesman! :o It was getting late that day, about 10:00 in the afternoon. The salesman,a.k.a Richie,was watching t.v. As he was surfing through the channels the windows in his balcony opened wide open! The t.v. flew out the balcony. And then, ........ TO BE CONTINUED!!!!
ReplyDelete"OUT AT SEA"
ReplyDeleteI have been out at sea for 21 days on a small raft. It is painted red underneath so i am watching out for sharks.
It is cold where I am so i see salmon and other fish jumping out of the water. As I try to catch one I fall in. I race back in the raft and warm myself up quickly so hypothermia will not set in...
Character Change
ReplyDeleteMy little brother Josh was always imature and wore shirts with cartoons on it and he always cried for no apparent reason ....
hunter like the story made me laugh
ReplyDeleteout at sea
ReplyDeletewell i was on a crusie and this big storm was coming and the captian said get to you're rooms you will be safe there and so we all went to our rooms and then a huge wave hit the boat and about say 20,000 people went to the upper deck and i was one of them. Then all the sudden the boat was sinking and we were goimg under so i was the only one to get a saftey boat so 19,000 people died that day and now im sitting here thinking what am i going to do????? It has been 10 days since that day i am starving and thirsty there are fish all around me and then all the sudden there is blood all around me and i started to panick and so to calm myself down i layed down then something was poking me and i was screaming i could have thought i saw something jump up in the air. so i ask myself am i going crazy????? Well no because there were now a pack of sharks around me and i could tell who was the leader because it was so huge that i thought that it was a bull shark but i dont know what kinda shark they were.Then i saw that i was bleeding because earlier i cut myself with pocket knife. So then i guess that the shark smelt it it bit my raft and tore the front half off. So now im scared then far off i see a boat and i start screaming and they here me so they speed over there a magicly all the sharks are gone and when the people got there i was saved and when they got me to land they had to fly me out to the hospital and i went home after two weeks and my family was so happy when i got home but i couldnt go anywhere for a week the doctors orders.So now im home safe and that is the end of my storie
One of the thing I learned from mrs gilchrist is how she taught me that I was a good writer and I can write good stories
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